Peer Review

    

    My portfolio project is something that has a lot of potential and it just needs some aesthetic work. My project was needing of work because I do not really know how to make a magazine because I have never done it before. There was a lot of things that needed to be changed like the cover imagine because it was a home gym image and mine is about going to the gym so I need to change that and make it better. My font on my portfolio project was just a little bit too bold and that makes it very masculine and that is not what I'm going for so I need to change it to something that is more overall and can apply to everyone. I also need to change some of the colors of the background and the layout because the colors that I chose were dark blue and grey so that really creates a masculine fell for the whole magazine and that is not what I want. I think that I should change the color to be a white background and that I should make the magazine more welcoming. Also, I was told that there was a lot going on and that I need to lighten it up a bit. There were a lot of intense borders and that I needed to make it a little less intense. The title to my project also needs to be altered because the word health can be used for many different things and I don't think that a gym magazine is for that. I also need to make sure that i talk about my feature article more than i did in the current version of the magazine. Right now, i think that my project needs a lot of work and there is a lot of potential but in the current state i dont like my project but i will soon when it is full complete and that is good. So overall, i just need to make the entire more focused on one thing and make it easier on the eyes and make it look nice. I think that the feedback that i received earlier in the week was very helpful and i look forward to making my project something that full represents my ability to make an awesome magazine.